tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9242710.post115505348677046991..comments2023-10-31T07:23:17.922-04:00Comments on The Theos Project: In the Arms of the AngelJonathan Erdmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04234688186113838474noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9242710.post-71302344411060718092009-06-09T14:40:50.928-04:002009-06-09T14:40:50.928-04:00聊天室交友聊天室交友聊天室尋夢園聊天室尋夢園聊天室尋夢園聊天室尋夢園聊天室尋夢園聊天室ut聊天室ut...<a href="http://eee195.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室交友</a><a href="http://eee196.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室交友</a><a href="http://eee197.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室尋夢園</a><a href="http://eee198.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室尋夢園</a><a href="http://eee199.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室尋夢園</a><a href="http://eee200.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室尋夢園</a><a href="http://eee201.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室尋夢園</a><a href="http://eee202.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室ut</a><a href="http://eee203.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室ut</a><a href="http://eee204.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室ut</a><a href="http://eee205.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室ut</a><a href="http://eee206.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室ut</a><a href="http://eee207.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室找一夜</a><a href="http://eee208.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室找一夜</a><a href="http://eee209.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室找一夜</a><a href="http://eee210.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室找一夜</a><a href="http://eee211.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">dv影視免費線上</a><a href="http://eee212.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">girl5320貼影片</a><a href="http://eee213.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室080</a><a href="http://eee214.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">免費視訊</a><a href="http://eee215.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">免費視訊聊天</a><a href="http://eee216.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室080</a><a href="http://eee217.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">免費視訊173liveshow</a><a href="http://eee218.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室交友pixnet</a><a href="http://eee219.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">0509 免費視訊聊天秀</a><a href="http://eee220.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">0509電話視訊聊天</a><a href="http://eee221.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室交友pixnet</a><a href="http://eee222.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">免費視訊 d736</a><a href="http://eee223.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">免費視訊go</a><a href="http://eee224.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室入口</a><a href="http://eee225.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">免費視訊美女</a><a href="http://eee226.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">免費視訊聊天室</a><a href="http://eee227.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室13060免費</a><a href="http://eee228.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室13060免費</a><a href="http://eee229.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室13060免費</a><a href="http://eee230.arcodb.org.tw" rel="nofollow">聊天室13060免費</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9242710.post-75284864674562652912006-09-21T08:32:00.000-04:002006-09-21T08:32:00.000-04:00Good thoughts, K. Thanks for weighing in.
Yes, th...Good thoughts, K. Thanks for weighing in.<br /><br />Yes, the "George call" is there for the confidence boost. She wouldn't have been able to get out of Indiana without it.<br /><br />That's one thing I went back and forth on as I wrote: How much ambiguity to leave and how much to say....<br /><br />Thanks again for your thoughts. Interesting to tie in the Dylan song.<br /><br />JonJonathan Erdmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04234688186113838474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9242710.post-84881640292927846632006-09-21T05:42:00.000-04:002006-09-21T05:42:00.000-04:00“Maria’s car was pointed west.” Just as I’m typing...<i>“Maria’s car was pointed west.”</i> Just as I’m typing your first sentence the song on the radio goes like this: <i>“I see my light come shining from the west down to the east”</i> – it's The Band’s classic cover of a Bob Dylan song. I’m reminded of the last song on the last <i>Rings</i> movie, with the pale moon rising in the west. Maria is Fate’s rider, and Fate has a trajectory.<br /><br />I like road stories. I like Maria. Bo is a vivid creep. The story engaged me. The juxtaposition of perspectives and parallel events added complexity and sustained suspense. Nice job.<br /><br />A couple questions. I’m not sure why George is in the story – a confidence boost at the key moment? I also wonder about leaving a little unresolved ambiguity; e.g., what would the ending be like if the reader wasn’t sure whether Amy had or had not written the letter? Maybe even the big revelation from the sheriff – your title implies angels; maybe you don’t need to say it so explicitly. But hey, that’s just me – it’s a cool story.john doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05484728969355294193noreply@blogger.com